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Thursday, September 1, 2011
gingerbread boy run by sansu
hi everyone,
Thanks so much everyone for your kind review!
i will fix the images and show you again soon.
it was very helpful and i learned a lot.
i feel so lucky to have my freinds who is supportive and great artists .
thank you.
Hi, Sansu! I can see You already did updated the first one.
I think Grandpa is clearer now. I like the shape of the house better, compositionally. One concern is, because of the use of color, my eyes goes to Grandpa. And since the boy is far and small, it is the last thing to find it. But All are pointing at the boy, so I don't think it is a big problem.
Style wise, I don't see a problem. The color scheme is different, though. Especially, the boy is yellow on Sketch 3 and white on the first one? Why is that?
Anyway, I'm so glad to see your new work!
I'm going for camping with my family this weekend. So I cannot give you any more comment until Monday.
Thank you Chiaki! Yeh, you are right. I keep staring at Granpa, too. It is so nice to borrow your sharp eyes!I want the boy to be the main focus.
I made the ginger boy in different color to make it pretty in diffrent images ... I wasnt sure if it is important to have a consistent color. I will re-think about that. I think yellow is a good color for the boy. Thank you for your kind comment and Have a nice camping!! Weather should be beautiful! Yay!
Hi, Sansu!
ReplyDeleteI can see You already did updated the first one.
I think Grandpa is clearer now.
I like the shape of the house better, compositionally.
One concern is, because of the use of color, my eyes goes to Grandpa.
And since the boy is far and small, it is the last thing to find it.
But All are pointing at the boy, so I don't think it is a big problem.
Style wise, I don't see a problem.
The color scheme is different, though.
Especially, the boy is yellow on Sketch 3 and white on the first one?
Why is that?
Anyway, I'm so glad to see your new work!
I'm going for camping with my family this weekend.
So I cannot give you any more comment until Monday.
Have a great long weekend!
Don't work too hard!
Chiaki
Thank you Chiaki! Yeh, you are right. I keep staring at Granpa, too. It is so nice to borrow your sharp eyes!I want the boy to be the main focus.
ReplyDeleteI made the ginger boy in different color to make it pretty in diffrent images ... I wasnt sure if it is important to have a consistent color. I will re-think about that. I think yellow is a good color for the boy.
Thank you for your kind comment and Have a nice camping!! Weather should be beautiful! Yay!